“They treasure their language, it is a part of them they willingly take risk to speak their language, even if they get beaten.” (Can somebody please correct my sentence by putting the punctuations in the right place? because I’m just randomly putting them in random spots.)

They treasure their language, it's a part of them, they willingly take risk to speak their language even if they get beaten.

Explanation:

Honestly punctuations here are applied after phrases, so basically this is the first phrase "they treasure their language". Moving on, you can clearly just get a hint where eaxctly to put the commas, three lines, and the three of them are talking about completly different things such as : "they treasure their language" indicates 'what do they treasure?'. Then "it's a part of them" indicates 'why do they treasure it?'. Next "they willingly take risk to speak their language even if they get beaten" talks about 'so what will they do?'

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beowulf sets out on his journey for daneland. -- 1

hrothgar welcomes beowulf. -- 2

beowulf waits for grendel to attack heorot. -- 3

beowulf succeeds in defeating grendel by tearing off his arm. -- 4

beowulf fights with grendel’s mother. -- 5

beowulf sets out for his fight with the dragon. -- 6

beowulf sets out for his geatish homeland. -- 7