Plz help this question gives me brain fog :) I don't have a mentor lol Topic sentence: A mentor that has helped me in my life was...

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Topic sentence: A mentor that has helped me in my life was my grandfather.

Concrete detail: He is a Military veteran who served in the Vietnam War with many badges and accomplishments under his belt.

Commentary: My grandfather has taught me how to be strong and courageous in tough times.

Commentary: I think that he is one of the bravest people that I have ever met.

Concrete detail: When I asked him about his service in the war, he said to me, "Being brave is not about being fearless. When I first experience those bombs and explosions going off, I was ready to pee my pants and bolt. But I didn't, I persevered for my country and my family so that you and other generations could live in a peaceful America."

Commentary:  Outside of being a war vet, my grandfather still has time to teach me how to fish and play baseball.

Commentary: I definitely inherited my love of sports and 70's music from him, and I enjoy these mutual hobbies with him every few weeks when I got to visit.

Concluding sentence: I truly believe that my grandfather is a great mentor that has taught me many skills in life. His experiences and advice helped shape me into the character that I am today.

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Topic sentence: A mentor that has helped me in my life is Jennifer Lopez.

Concrete detail: J-Lo is a music and dance sensation with many hit singles and dance numbers decorating her resume. She even performed at the president's inauguration.  

Commentary: I personally love Jennifer Lopez's sense of style and boldness.

Commentary: She always stays true to her character and carries herself like royalty. Her mannerisms inspire me to shake my inhibitions and be more confident in who I am.

Concrete detail: Jennifer Lopez has worked with other artists in t.v shows, songs, and movies and she takes good care of herself.

Commentary: I want to be able to collaborate with others successfully, just like she has. Good personal connections are very important in life.

Commentary: J-Lo also inspires me to take better care of myself and I hope to have silky smooth skin like her even when I'm 50 and ageing.

Concluding sentence:​ Even though I have never met her personally, I idolize Jennifer Lopez and I think that she is a good role model for girls who need and example of how to carry themselves around others.

a) he encouraged islamic schools to introduce greek texts.

d) he invited greek scholars to teach their texts to the locals.

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