A paragraph that summarized Jonathan swifts "a modest proposal " and explain his purpose

In A Modest Proposal, Jonathan Swift proposes that the Irish should eat their children, as it will produce several benefits. He claims that it will help with population control, making money, prevent crime, and make fashionable clothing out of the children.

b. his ability to use formal language to stress strong feelings

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.