Part B – Drafting Your Narrative Now, you'll use the plan you made in part A to draft your narrative. As you write, be sure to include the following:
telling details, sensory details, a voice that is appropriate for your task, audience, and purpose

Draft your narrative in the space below.

some sort of sound device i believe.

answer: ,nnn

explanation:

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."

in our power to make a world happy - to teach mankind the art of being so - to a character hitherto unknown - and to have, as it were, a new creation intrusted to our hands, are honors that command reflection, and can neither be too highly estimated,