Read the sentence. After school, Robbie likes to play video games, and when Robbie is playing video games after school, he likes to have a snack. Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in the sentence? After school, while Robbie is playing video games, he also likes to have something to eat, like a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and have a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and at the same time he is playing he likes to have a snack. After school, Robbie likes to play video games and while he is playing video games he likes to have a snack.

Motif in movies refers a. the opening credits b. shots of the beach c. the comments of movie reviewers d. a recurring pattern of images

However, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. what would be the best way to revise this sentence for greater clarity? a) however, the fact that columbus left spain thousands of years after people settled what would become the united states never dawned on me. b) it never dawned on me, however, the idea of real-life people living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain. c) however, the fact that people were already living in what would become the united states for thousands of years before columbus ever left spain never dawned on me. d) however, the idea never dawned on me that long before columbus ever left spain, real-life people lived for thousands of years in what would become the united states.

Which statement correctly describes the verb function in this sentence? the word “dancing” is a verb that functions as a noun. the word “dancing” is a verb that functions as an adjective. the word “becoming” is a verb that functions as a noun. the word “becoming” is a verb that functions as an adjective.