IMAGINE THAT YOU ARE LIVING AWAY FROM HOME YOUR SISTER AT HOME IS RATHER CAREFREE ABOUT FOOD WORK AND REST AND IS SPOILING HEALTH WRITE HER PERSUASIVE LETTER TELLING HER HOW SHE CAN IMPROVE HER HEALTH?

Which sentence best contrasts two things? a. air travel, like bus travel, is a fun way to get from one place to another. b. air travel is a fun and relatively easy way to get from place to place. c. both bus travel and air travel require substantial planning. d. air travel is much more expensive than bus travel.

Secret in slovakia how does the author's use of foreshadowing in the opening paragraphs affect the passage? a. it creates excitement by revealing the narrator's hopes of receiving part of her great-aunt's estate. b. it creates dread through its vivid descriptions of the house; readers are aware that something terrible has happened within those walls. c. it creates mystery by suggesting that the narrator's view of the house will somehow change as a result of her experiences inside. d. it creates a sense of joy and anticipation by hinting that the narrator will be reconnected with her great-aunt.

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?