Discuss Your Draft Post the draft of your personal narrative to the discussion board according to your teacher’s instructions. Review two of your peers’ narratives. Provide feedback based on these questions. Include specific details in your response. Use the responses of your peers to help you improve your own personal narrative. Does the draft tell a story that has a narrative arc? What are the plot’s most interesting parts? Could any parts of the plot be expanded or omitted? Why? Does the draft establish a consistent narrative point of view? What makes it a good (or not so good) choice of point of view for this story? Does the draft use dialogue? How realistic is it? How effective is it in portraying characters and moving the plot forward? How might the dialogue be improved? Does the draft contain a second plot line? How effective is it, and why?