February 22, 2015 Dr. Anne Jones
415 Roger Drive
Stone, Texas 22222
Dear Dr. Jones:
I was enrolled in your Critical Environmental Issues course last summer, an experience that greatly increased my knowledge about the subject. I
have continued to pursue my interest in the field through extensive reading and additional seminars.
[A]I am now a senior in high school and am planning to attend Plum College where I will major in ecology [B] I am applying for a scholarship that
Plum College offers to aspiring environmentalists, and I would like to list you as a reference on my application. The scholarship application is
due March 15.
Jane wants to add a sentence between sentence A and sentence B in paragraph 2.
Which sentence, if added, would best maintain the tone of the letter?
O 1. The school's ecology program seems like a lot of fun.
03. The school has an ecology program that has been
recognized nationally.
O 2. The school's environmental studies staff is super famous,
4. The school recently spent big bucks on a new
environmental studies building.
My