Two great kings one in France and one in Russia…. BUT who is the best? Could it be Louis XIV or could it be peter the great? Today we will be going through who was a better king and once and for all figure out who was the better king will it be the king of France Louis XIV or will it be the king of Russia peter the great I guess you’ll just have to wait and see… does this sound good and does it need to be fixed to make it more catchy !!! please help this is my introductery paragraph ( pleASE fix)

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answer; i believe that the   correct answer is (d)the use of descriptive words that bring your reader into the story, not using literal words for check luck

the illustration   that would give a reader a clear understanding of the text is a picture of men constructing the frame of a building.the frame is made of iron bars. the text describes the job of blacksmiths'. these were very organised and they had different names: "the driver" and "the heater". the text describes the way in which these men worked ; they worked iron pieces as if they were playing a sport. in fact, the text wants to show the men's skills. the text also puts some emphasis on the use of '' rivets'' in construction. this kind of nails were not always used in the construction of manhattan.

some examples:

"and with an underhand toss he hurled the smoking rivet straight at the catcher, who caught it in mid-air in his catching can." men's skills

"when the driver was ready for a new " the emphasis on the rivet ( special nail used in construction).

" it against a beam to remove any cinders, and jammed it into the waiting hole. " the emphasis on the rivet.

people wont do this for 10 points you need at least 50