For this activity, you will read a paragraph that has many errors. You will identify the errors, and re-write the paragraph using correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and mechanics. Original Paragraph

Malcolm was an avid photographer. He and his family likes to take pictures of nature and also taking portraits. When he was in california Malcolm liked to visit lake tahoe and takes pictures of the wildlife and sometimes the animals were moving to fast and they was blurry but the pictures of the lake were always perfect. Including pictures of sunsets over the lake with the mountains in the background.

Check for:
Subject verb agreement
Run-ons and sentence fragments
Capitalization and Punctuation
Grammar and Understandability
Sentence variety and style