For this activity, you will read a paragraph that has many errors. You will identify the errors, and re-write the paragraph using correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and mechanics. Original Paragraph:

Malcolm was an avid photographer. He and his family likes to take pictures of nature and also taking
portraits. When he was in california Malcolm liked to visit lake tahoe and takes pictures of the wildlife and
sometimes the animals were moving to fast and they was blurry but the pictures of the lake were always perfect. Including pictures of sunsets over the lake with the mountains in the background.

Check for:
•Subject verb agreement
•Run-ons and sentence fragments
•Capitalization and Punctuation
•Grammar and Understandability
•Sentence Variety and Style

you need to include the text. we have no idea what you are referring to

that is literally a whole assignment and i'm not sure anyone in their right mind or even wrong mind is going to do an entire assignment for someone just for 100 points on a website. sorry to tell you like

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.