Help on my poem at least 18 lines, two smiles, two metaphors, two lines of alliteration, two lines of repetition, one line of personification, many lines of imagery

See explanation for answer.

Explanation:

Metaphors:

Your eyes are as brighter than the light

Your hair is as dark as the night

Smilies:

You’re a rose yet I’m the thorns

You’re a blue sky but I’m the storm

Repetition:

I might never meet someone like you again

Guess that’s my fault, I’ll explain things then

Someone like you again

Alliteration:

Please give poor girls like me protection

Pacing in the corner with no direction  

Personification:

As raindrops danced down my windshield

Guess I messed up again, not surprised then

Side Notes:

Yes, this is my original work. I'm sorry that it's not 18 lines long and the alliteration should probably be re-configured. Also, if you are a guy you definitely will need to change some of the lines and the pronouns used.

I hope I helped!

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