How dare the water belittle my thirst, treat me as just
another
small
disturbance,
try to feed me
10 from the bottom of its hand?
Which revision(s) could take place to improve the flow and impa
A.
How dare the water belittle my thirst? How dare it tre
it to try to feed me from the bottom of its hand?!
B.
How dare the water belittle my thirst, treat me as an
C.
How dare the water, belittling my thirst, treat me as
tregon the bottom of its hand!
No revision(s) needed