"I was revising the first draft of my essay and I noticed that one of my paragraphs doesn't support my main point. What should I do?" What should you say to help this student?
First, use some prewriting activities to come up with some new supporting ideas, and then try rewriting that paragraph.
It's too late to do anything about it. After you revise, the next step in the writing process is editing.

To avoid plagiarizing someone else’s work, you should do all of the following, except: a. carefully note all of your sources b. include your citation of your sources in your speech c. paraphrase the quotation (say it in your own words) without citing the source d. make it clear that the information did not come from your own brain

Which of these sentences exhibits proper usage? a. many doctors affiliated with university hospital expressed concern about the policy (moore 5). b. many doctors affiliated with university hospital expressed concern about the policy (moore 5). c. many doctors affiliated with university hospital expressed concern about the policy (moore 5). d. many doctors affiliated with university hospital expressed concern about the policy (moore 5).

Witch sentence contain an adverb clause