Write a story which begins with two people waiting for someone. You should consider:
• the people who are waiting – are they friends, members of a family or do they work together?
• the setting − where are they waiting?
• what happens when the person they are waiting for arrives or does not arrive?
(350-400 words) ( people who answer random stuff and takes the points away will be reported from 10 different account)

when i was going to the park I saw 2 people waiting for a long time. I knew their name too they were my neighbours Mr Miller and Mrs Miller. I thought to ask them to join me back home but I was scared they looked mysterious all the time. So, I sat down sipping my juice and eating my apple. When I was ready to go home I saw a black van come and pick up Mr and Mrs Miller. I was shocked and frighten. When I saw them they covered their faces. I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My parents said to me'' honey, you might have seen something else, they are good people'' said my father. I went to the police station and told the police '' oh, you might have seen something else, how can 2 old people be thieves?'' said the officer, saw them cover their faces! I saw them run away! I saw them with bags and 3 more people! they are thieves'' I said with anger then I said to myself'' no one believes me, so what if they are old they can steal things! cant they?''.

i will find things out my self. I knew i had a friend who was a police i talked to him and asked him to help me ,'' 2 old people robbing! insane! but i can help'' he said .i told him the van number and he began to search.

after 2 days mr.miller and mrs.miller came home ,they live beside my house.i was scared i hid behind a bush and listened to them say '' what if someone finds out the secret base! we might be in trouble!'' then mriller said''oh dear no one can find it no one lives by the creek''

i thought to myself ''the base is inn the creek, i gotta tell the police [brain who helps me always] . i talked about the creek to brain  the officer. he took me to the creek . we found a house empty and creepy.

i said ''brain what if there are ghosts and people with gun'' i was scared.

brain said ''ha ha there are no ghosts just might be people with guns ,dont worry i'll protect u i have guns too'' we walked to the house

we saw no one then we step into a room we saw 3 people i said it is them! brain caught them alive.

we tapped them to seats. we opened the cupboard and found gold,diamonds,drugs,and many other things .

luckily we caught them .brain called the fbi agents and they caught mr and mrs miller.

the author develops a cold, and scared tone. making the reader shudder with fear, and suddenly become cold. i'm guessing that he's writing a scary novel, or maybe about a chilly december night.