In the story, The wife's story..How does the author use word choice to create suspense in the story?

Sarah tried to erase the files full of illegal in her computer before the police arrived, but she was too late.

Which of the following resources would best you to correct an awkward sentence structure? a) writing fiction: a guide to narrative craft b) story trumps structure: how to write unforgettable fiction by breaking the rules c) artful sentences d) the artist’s way

Which tone best fits a business letter