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1. The person was eating.
Think: What kind of person? What did they look like? What were they eating? How were they eating it?
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2. Jessica dresses unusually.
Think: What was she wearing? For contrast, what were other people around her wearing?
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3. There was a storm outside.
Think: How do you know there was a storm outside? What does a storm look/sound/feel /smell like to you? Use vivid sensory language to create the mood of a storm.
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4. His bedroom is a disaster.
Think: Don’t tell me that it’s messy. Describe the objects in the room, and how they are placed, and let the reader infer that it is a “disaster.” What does it smell like? Consider using a creative simile or metaphor.
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5. He is very smart and a great student.
Think: What does he do to make you think he is smart? What makes him a great student? Tell a story here that SHOWS us he is smart and a great student without TELLING us this.
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6. She is a talented artist.
Think: What kind of art? How do you know she is talented? What does her art look/sound like? Paint a picture with your words that SHOWS us that she is a talented artist without TELLING us directly.
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7. I am anxious.
Think: How do you act and/or feel when you are anxious? NOTE: Do not tell us WHY you are anxious, just describe what fear looks and feels like.
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8. The old man is very kind.
Think: How do you know he is old? What does old look like? What does he do to make you think he is kind?
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9. He looked angry.
Think: How do you know he is angry? NOTE: Do not tell us WHY he is angry, just describe what angry looks like. What are the physical signs that show you someone is angry?
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10. The beautiful woman drank from a cup.
Think: What did she look like (describe her beauty without telling us she is beautiful)? What was she drinking? How was she drinking it? What sort of cup was it — a mug, a glass?
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