I want paragraphs please help me

First, a good way for students to relax is take a break from work and rest because they have more time to do what they want. (Intro)
(Supporting sentence) Next, students need to relax to take a break from work because they can get tired and exhausted of all the stuff they have, students can get overworked which will get them worked up even more so they need a break, and students need take a break because they need to reboot and it can reduce the stress. (Concluding sentence) Taking a break from work can help you relax to get the necessary recharge it needs to keep going. Sorry if paragraph sucks I tried