Hi, can someone please read my poem? The POV is someone you've never seen, but you can still envision them. I had a poetry contest and lost, and I want to get better. If someone is sincere, please just tell me your opinion. How you feel when you read it. Your opinions will help me to improve. My poem is below: No encounters whatsoever, still, I felt I could see you.
Your image was painted vaguely in my thoughts.
Days passed and slowly, I felt I could see you, even if it was blurry.
Without hurry, I went drawing your features, those that made you unique.
Your eyes, nose, lips, the way you smile.
Although I could never envision you entirely, it wasn't an impediment for my imagination.