A. Read the draft model. Use the questions to help you add facts to the writing.
Draft Model
Many kinds of fish live in the ocean. Fish can be big
or small. Some fish like to swim together.
1. What is the topic of your writing?
2. What details tell about the main idea?
3. What facts could you add to the writing?
B. Now revise the draft by adding facts to the
writing.

I’n a rough draft, where should the main idea first appear in the paper

Although william carlos williams rejected traditional verse forms he still believed that is was important to use poetic devices to distinguish verse from prose.

1. at the conclusion of chapter 13, the monster realizes that he has none of the qualities or possessions that human beings value, and so he worries the he will be forever miserable. he says, “oh, that i had for ever remained in my native wood, nor known nor felt beyond the sensations of hunger, thirst, and heat! ” this statement recalls one made by victor frankenstein in chapter 10: “if our impulses were confined to hunger, thirst, and desire, we might nearly be free; but now we are moved by every wind that blows, and a chance word or scene that that word may convey to us.” questions: what do these two statements suggest about the impact of knowledge? how do the statements affect the way readers view the monster and victor?