someone broke in to a local jewelers shop yesterday. The owner had just locked up the shop when a robber with a gun threatened him. the robber told him to unlock the shop and give him all the demands in a safe. Then the robber tied him up. the police have organized a search for the robber. they hope they will find him in a few days. Doctors are treating the owner of the shop for shock.

Someone broke into a local Jewelers store yesterday. The owner had just locked up the shop, when a thief with a gun threatened him. The robber told him to unlock the shop and give him all the money from the safe. Then the criminal tied the man up. The police have organized a search for the thief. They hope they can find him in a few days. Doctors are diagnosing the owner of the shop for shock.

Explanation:

-Beginning of sentences have to be capitalized

- The use of the word robber is used to many times

-No commas where they should be

-demands is used in an improper way

-treating is used improperly

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recent news about two years ago indicates that a polish forestry student by chance unearthed at a depth of about 40cm (16 inches), during digging in a damp polish forest he found a 13-page manuscript into a thermos flask.

greek jew marcel nadjari was a aischwitz slave who witnessed how the nazi's built big death chambers and crematoriums and told how he was forced to escort fellow jews to the gas chambers. he accounts on this manuscript how the nazi's disguised this chambers to look like showers. also, he describes this place as a process of extermination from the chambers to the trains arriving to take the bodies.

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