I just wrote this is it okay it isnot graded but is it interesting We were at school, it was break and a group of us were in an empty classroom.

We decided to play a game called 7 minutes in heaven. My crush was there and he was staring at me with lustful eyes. I noticed him and I smiled back. It was his turn and the bottle landed right at me. "Oh my god," I thought to myself ,he smiled and said ,"i choose you!". The others were wooing us and I could feel my heart my heart racing with excitement. As we entered, we held hand and he shut the door. He stared at me I also stared at him, to be honest it was getting boring and very hot inside. It was nothing like the storied I've read and was disappointed he didn't want to kiss me.

Then he suddenly asked me this question "do you like me ?". I stared at him shocked he asked but I nodded shyly. Then he suddenly grabbed me by my shoulders and held me against the wall inside of the closet. He looked at me with those dreamy eyes of his, and smiled mischievously. He then started to kiss my thighs slowly and I thought to myself what if the other heard us. HE looked up and stared at my lips and we kissed, I felt his hand slide under my skirt and into my underwear and his finger went into me. IT was awesome , he sucked my tongue and I wrapped my hand around him and moaned. HIS hand grabbed my legs and I wrapped my legs around him like a squid.

is this alright also i am 13 do i have talent