Can someone help me and give me tips on what this story could be about and check my grammar too inorder to get marked brainliest! =]

Firstly, “ one evening morning” those are two different times of the day.
secondly, it is “On one evening” not “In one evening”
thirdly, place a “,” after the word “chirp”
fourthly, place a comma instead of a full stop before the “ you hear a knock on the door” If its a new sentence just capitalize the “Y”
fifth, capitalize the “A” in “as”
sixth, Place a comma after the word “door”