Can someone grade me 1 - 10 ? I'll send you the writing to you. DO NOT REWRITE IT !
Do not even tell me how to write it!
I DO NOT WANT TO CHEAT.
I just wish to know if you think it sounds good.

I'm in 10th Grade Honors writing an essay for a test grade due tmr at 7:45 am or something... ? I just want a proof read. Make sure it's okay.

For Ms. Martin :D

a. beside the fence

explanation:

very interesting story but where is the question what is actually a question i don't understand

"why don't you like me the way i am? " i cried. "i'm not a genius! i can't play the piano, and even if i could, i wouldn't go on tv if you paid me a million dollars! "

explanation:

the conflict between jing-mei and her mother is over jing-mei's piano lessons since her mother wants her to become a prodigy but she does not want to play it any more.