Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing style of a story?
A. Though the road was bumpy, the caravan drove on, and
passengers stared out their windows. Because it was a long way
down, some of them were afraid, and they thought the route was
too dangerous.
B. The road was bumpy, yet the caravan drove on. Passengers stared
out their windows, but it was a long way down. Some of them were
afraid, and they thought the route was too dangerous.
C. The road was bumpy. The caravan drove on. Passengers stared
out their windows. It was a long way down. Some of them were
afraid. They thought the route was too dangerous
D. Though the road was bumpy, the caravan drove on. Passhrgers
stared out their windows. It was a long way down, and some of
them were afraid. They thought the route was too dangerous.
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