Read the text and answer the questions that follow. Elizabeth shivered as the wind howled outside the unfamiliar cabin. She hovered at the tiny window, anxiously searching for a glimpse
of her father. The twilight was fading fast; if Father did not hurry he would be trying to find his way back to their isolated new home in the dark
Earlier in the day. Elizabeth had unpacked their few belongings. Ashlight fell, something banged against the side of the cabin, rattling the dishes stacked by the empty fireplace, and Elizabeth jumped.
Which sentence should be deleted to improve the overall organization of the scene? Why? How could this sentence be revised to fit into the
existing organization of the scene?