At a fundraising event, Edmond is drawing raffle tickets to determine winners. Edmond has already drawn a ticket for the first prize, and will next draw a name for the second prize. Are these two events dependent or independent?

Dependent.

Explanation:

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the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.