Can someone edit this paragraph and make it sound better?? I wrote it for my school work and I'm not really liking it and I can't make it sound better. Please and thank you.. "Focusing on your studies will lead to good grades and good grades will lead to you getting into a great college or university. By concentrating on your studies, you can get an idea of what is out in the world. It can help you can figure out what job takes what, for instance, if you’re good at math you can figure out how many careers use mathematics in their daily lives, not only that, you can manage your finances and know how much you’re going to have once you pay your taxes and other stuff. If you live with a roommate, you can divide the expense and calculate out how much you and your roommate both have to pay."

the answer is slaves

douglas was a slave who turned into a statesman and he refused to celebrate the 4th of july until all slaves were emancipated or set free.

here's some tricks. write on a book that you have read and really enjoyed. first, start by writing down basic event in the book. have your first paragraph be an intro explaining like the author, the reason the book was written if known, and other backround info like that. paragraph two explain what happens in the first few chapters and the signifigance it had. then for paragraph 3, do the same thing but for the middle. i'm pretty sure you get the point for paragraph 4. just rap things up and explain the call to action. for the final paragragh (paragraph 5) , explain your views on the book, the message, ect. tip: something that might is to go onto cliff notes or something and read the anaylisis of each chapter.

some books i recommend;

diary of anne frank

lord of the flies

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