What revision, if any, is needed to make this thesis statement more effective? In the novel Lord of the Flies, William Golding uses Ralph, with his leadership, initial optimism, and naivete, as a symbol for order and civilization.

a) It needs to address meaning, or the "so what?"

b) It needs to be arguable or defensible.

c) It should provide evidence for the position.

d) It should provide the last names of characters.

e) No revision is needed; the thesis is effective.

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margaret paston and william paston got married in 1441. as william had to attend business, margaret was in charge of administrating her husband's properties and they communicated each other by letters. they had 7 children.   margery paston, one of those children, had a secret romance with richard calle, the family's bookkeeper and the pastons rejected them, as they tend to get marriage arranged for their children. margery and richard ended up getting married for love, but in secret by the church bishop.