According to The Elements of Style, what is the correct way to revise this sentence? While she slept, the alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear. The alarm kept ringing in Jamie's ear, while she slept. The alarm kept ringing while she slept in Jamie's ear. No change.

The balance includes both the fees for service and the shipping charges. is this sentence incomplete or complete?

3. how could the following sentence be rewritten as an exclamatory sentence? how dangerous was the saber-toothed tiger? a. tell someone how dangerous the saber-toothed tiger was. b. the saber-toothed tiger was dangerous. c. the saber-toothed tiger was dangerous! d. no change is necessary. c. the saber-toothed tiger was dangerous!

Read the sentence from last lecture by randy pausch. all right, so what we’re not talking about today, we are not talking about cancer, because i spent a lot of time talking about that and i’m really not interested. pausch tells his audience this because he wants them to know that