Can someone revise this and make it better? I will give you lots of points! The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." Both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished for sum. Although this is the same the instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." In both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished amount for sum. Although this is the same, instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

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everyday, people all over the world are making sacrifices; all for different reasons. some people may choose to do more simple sacrifices, like, "my daughter is receiving an award at school, but i also have an appointment, so i will decide to cancel that appointment to be there with my daughter" although she is cancelling her appointment, she can easily reschedule it, and spend her time with nore important thungs in life: being there with her daughter. this will make her daughter happy too because she is recieveing an award for her hard work, and it brings us happiness when our hard work is noticed and appreciated.

on the other hand, some people dont know when to make a sacrifice, ir bow to make one. well, making a sacrifice is when you do something for someone else other than yourself, for someone else's happiness, not so you can gain something in return. you do it for them, not for you. so, anyone can make a sacrifice, even the most simplest ones, like giving up the tv for a sibling or a sibling with homework, when you could be doing something else. the point is to others, when you can be doing something else. you do it out of the fact that you want to them, not so that it can benefit you.

making sacrifices benefit people in many ways, it can bring a smile to there face knowing someone is willing to and bring kindess. alot of people tend to feel unwanted and that no one is there for them, but if we show kindess and sacrifice the less importnat things in life for the most important things in life, people will once again feel happiness and more at ease knowing that someone is or was there for them, even if it be only once.

hope this , and let me know if there are any typos, it's hard typing on a phone : )