View the photo don't put anything random go do that somewhere else

What does bittman’s style and language tell you about him?

Which of the following sentences uses dashes correctly? a. i looked under the bed - get this - and there it was! b. i need - a lot of - colors for this painting. c. i can't believe my own - brother! - is now a mayor. d. tom and i - are planning - a wedding in june.

Changing the sentence structure and how quickly events unfold in a story can affect which literally element?