THIS IS URGENT!!! IT'S FOR A TEST Rewrite the sentences to correct the error--either a misplaced modifier, a squinting modifier, a dangling modifier, or an instance of faulty parallelism.

1. Knowing his tendency to oversleep and because he needed to be on time, Paul bought an alarm clock.

2. After mopping the floor, the house was ready for guests.

3. The general told his orderly before the battle he could go on leave.

4. We kept an extra rack for the stove in the closet.

5. Our driving instructor taught us to confidently but not aggressively drive.

the inciting incident of cinderella is when the invitation is sent out to all the eligible women in the land, but her stepmother refuses to let her go. keep in mind that an inciting incident must incite the character, causing an emotional response that will result in the character taking action. the actual action a character take is almost always some time after when the inciting incident occurs. this gives the character and the reader time to consider what action should be taken as a result of this emotional affront. in the case of cinderella, enough time passes for the stepsisters to head off to the ball. cinderella then chooses to take action. depending on which version we are referring to, this action varies. in some versions, she makes a wish. in some versions, this is where the fairy godmother comes into the picture. but in all cases, cinderella makes the decision to go to the ball against the wishes of her step-family as a result of the emotions she feels when the inciting incident occurs.

u have to underline the word bo

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