Which statement best evaluates the effect of changing the pacing in the second version of the passage?
Passage 1:
"Yay! I hide first," Jaxon squealed. Then he took off running. I started
counting. I peeked through my hands. I needed to see where he was
going. His head popped up. He was behind the couch. Finally, he bent
down and disappeared.
Passage 2:
"Yay! I hide first!" Jaxon squealed and clapped his hands, and then he
took off running across the room. I started counting slowly and loudly.
but peeked through my hands so I could see where he was going. In a
minute, his blond head popped up behind the couch and then
disappeared.