1) What is the best explanation of what needs revising in the following sentences? # 4 Jerry does begin to change at the beginning of the story. The act that truly shows how similar the two brothers are comes near the end of the story. At the very begin
contribute more money to his father's gift fund but is too late. His reaction at the end of the story shows how much he truly cares about his father.
A) The first sentence does not express a complete thought
B) The second sentence is jumbled and unclear
The sentences are choppy and need to be combined
D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order