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Oprah Winfrey is an American talk show host, television producer, actress, author, philanthropist, and entrepreneur. I picked Oprah because she is an amazing successful woman who had a very sad upbringing but didn't let that stop her from becoming such a powerful success story. She started her entrepreneur career when she founded own production facility in 1988. Thereafter, she had started television shows, charities, and helped women with her various motivational talks. She continued to inspire and help those who suffered similar issues. Today, Oprah would be a billionaire. Profiting for her self created websites and ongoing tv show.

Oprah Winfrey is an American talk show host, television producer, actress, author, philanthropist, and entrepreneur. I picked Oprah because she is an amazing successful woman who had a very sad upbringing but didn't let that stop her from becoming such a powerful success story. She started her entrepreneur career when she founded own production facility in 1988. Thereafter, she had started television shows, charities, and helped women with her various motivational talks. She continued to inspire and help those who suffered similar issues. Today, Oprah would be a billionaire. Profiting for her self created websites and ongoing tv show.

i Honestley think you did really good just on the parts where i underlined you should look back at. i think you forgot to put a her before production facility. Instead of there after i would say soon after. and on the part where it says her various motivational talks i would put something like her many or her numerous motivational speeches.

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