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English, 14.04.2022 07:50 emmahall0826

I am writing a sonnet, which has a strict format to follow, i wrote an original poem and I'm hoping for any editing tips at all. "You were nothing, just some other person.
Once curiosity blossomed in my way,
You couldn't catch my eye without a reason
I realized that your smiles can't dismay

It was strange first learning how your name flows
Next thing you know, I saw it everywhere
Funny how now when you're near my face glows
Feelings are questionable, are these fair?

Im too young, I refuse these feelings, lies
However thoughts never leave me in, peace
I'm longing to see whats behind your eyes
Saying hi to you, would chances increase?"

I havent finished couplet yet but any help would be great

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