What are some fancy words you would personally use in an essay for an application? i'm filling out an application for a homeschooling program, and i want to impress. it's coming along pretty nice, but i'd love to see some word's that you guys' think i could add, or overall just some advice to make my essay part of the application even better. in advance!

Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence? while reading a new mystery book, my dog curled up in my lap and slept. a.) curled up in my lap, my dog slept while reading a new mystery book. b.) while i was reading a new mystery book, my dog curled up in my lap and slept. c.) my dog, while reading a new mystery book, curled up in my lap and slept. d.) curling up in my lap while reading a new mystery book, my dog slept.

Could someone write me a personal narrative it can be your idea

Which character shows external character development in the crucible