Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime, but they must be enforced in the home. "my parents don't really make me follow the curfew." another resident says her "children are in high school now" and so they "don't listen to me anyway."which revision criterion could be used to improve this excerpt? a. use of support b. coherence c. grammar d. word choice

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B.Coherence

Explanation:

The passage is incoherent which implies that the focuses are not logically associated. At a certain point, to start with, we have curfews and their institution in homes, and after that all of a sudden we hop to kids being in secondary school who don't tune in to their parents.

scout gets in a bad position on the primary day of school since she can read and on the grounds that she can compose. she likewise gets in a bad position for explaining to miss caroline that she shouldn't attempt … to loan cash to walter on the grounds that he won't take it since he is to poor to pay it back.

the narrator is saying that the old lady made her feel uncomfortable. you know this because they say "i found that rather irksome", "perhaps it was her being so upright and trim", and "i don't think it was that, because i thought that quaintly pleasant." hope this !