Brenda wants to make sure her essay has a beginning, middle, and end. what characteristic of effective writing will she focus on? a. conventions b. ideas c. organization d. voice

a

explanation:

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

c. when the head chef asks the applicants to make any creative dish they like (i did the usatestprep)

what are you