My eight year old brother is a pest. he is eight. he has black hair. he is not the average size of an eight year old. he is short for his age. he gets uo early on saturday mornings and wakes everyone up because the cartoons are on. on weekdays, we must make him get up to get ready for school. he always waits until the last minute to put on his cloths. when he dosent get his way, he whines until he gets it. he is a spoiled little brat. he always gets his way with our parents. this is the little boy that i have to put up with everyday. what is wrong with this paragraph?

to create suspense.

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .