Read the conclusion from a personal narrative. even though we were lost in the desert for several hours, we made it home safely, because we had packed extra food and water. our families were very relieved to see us alive and well. which sentence, if added, would make the best revision of the conclusion? “where is the main trail? ” i asked while searching the map. after surviving those miserable hours in the desert, i learned the value of being prepared. my friends invited me to go for a hike, and although it was a hot summer day, i agreed to go, because i had nothing else to do. “be sure to drink some water,” tara reminded us.