Identify the sentence or sentences in the passage below that should be either rewritten or removed. the play a midsummer night's dream opens with romantic love gone awry. shakespeare wrote the play. an asymmetry of emotions is immediately established: demetrius loves hermia, hermia loves lysander, and lysander loves hermia. to complicate matters, enter another woman, helena, who loves demetrius. now, we have one woman loved by two men and one woman loved by no man at all. if only there were a way to shift the affections of one man to the unfortunate helena, then all would be righted

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report