Janice is describing why she did not enjoy camping with her family. which description is most engaging? this summer, we camped at a big lake. i didn’t really like the lake. the water was cold. this summer, we camped on a frigid lake. the water instantly turned you into an icicle. this summer, we camped at a lake in the woods. we tried swimming, but the water was too cold. this summer, we camped at a lake. the lake was about a mile long and a half-mile wide.

This summer, we camped on a frigid lake. The water instantly turned you into an icicle.

Explanation:

This is the most engaging description of the camping trip. Although all of the descriptions talk about the same events, the fact that the descriptions use different language makes them very different in terms of how interesting they are for the audience. This is the sentence that is most engaging for the audience because it uses vivid and descriptive words that paint a picture in the mind of the reader.

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are you kidding? from that description of two mansions, you can't figure out which one is bleak and desolate? maybe you should consider looking those words up in a dictionary, if you don't know what they mean already.