Read the passage. mary lou williams was a jazz pianist, composer, and arranger who was a major influence on many jazz musicians. during the 1930s and early 1940s williams was a member of andy kirk’s band. she was an influence on his style. williams wrote many songs for his band and was his pianist. she also created arrangements for swing bands such as benny goodman’s and tommy dorsey’s. which would you focus on in order to improve the quality of writing? replacing the be verbs with action verbs varying the sentence length rearranging the sequence of ideas summarizing the main idea

honestly, school in itself just seems to be a huge waste of time. a lot of people graduate but still end up not doing anything in college anyways, which really makes the whole point of graduating seem useless. i'd rather not bring anyone's hopes up then. what i'd recommend is for whoever's reading this to simply drop out.

i mean, kanye did it. he said something along the lines of, "don't let society tell you what to do." now, he's obviously a very successful person, and since his album is called the college dropout i guess he never really had to go through all that nonsense in order to become a millionaire. the same goes for anyone else then.

yes, post it and i can try to you out.