Derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old in 2011 at yankee stadium in the bronx. which is the best way to revise this complex sentence? in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees at yankee stadium in the bronx. he was thirty-seven years old. in 2011, derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees. at yankee stadium in the bronx, he was thirty-seven years old. derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit for the new york yankees when he was thirty-seven years old playing at yankee stadium. in the bronx. derek jeter notched his 3,000th hit at age thirty-seven. in the bronx at yankee stadium in 2011.

do you know the story wonder?

well on wonder it has different stories from each person and they can all share their thoughts and feeling each not just one. if there was one you would only get to see one persons thoughts and feelings. so do a story point on multiple of the main characters.

hope i !

- lilblakeyout

the purpose of the heading in the passage is to identify who is telling the story.

this excerpt is part of the book sugar changed the world (2010) written by marc aronson and marina budhos. as the book has been written by two people, the heading "marc" indicates that this specific excerpt is being narrated by aronson. in the fragment, marc describes his grandfather's story after hearing it from his cousin. however, there are other excerpts where budhos is the one that tells the story of her family.

aronson and budhos, who are husband and wife in real life, decided to write sugar changed the world when they found out how sugar, which had an important role in slavery and economy, changed their ancestors' lives.