Can someone proofread my essay? i'm going to attach it, and personally i feel like my conclusion may have been too redundant and repetitive, but i'll leave that for you guys to decide lol.

the correct answer is b. in order to explain a point clearly in an essay, it is always better to include a clear example of your ideas. including an scenario in which a family is affected by consumerism will support your argument as well as supporting details, such as quotations from experts and statistics. option a could be correct, but statistics and quotations are supporting ideas rather than clear explanations. choices c and d are simply inadequate. they do not add information about the effects of consumerism, rather they are strategies for engaging the reader

sugar had three basic uses in ancient india. it was used in religious rites, consumed as a snack, and was considered a kind of medicine.

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