Read the conclusion to a personal statement. (1) i’ve had some growth experiences. (2) they’ve me to improve my math skills. (3) moreover, i have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) i’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer. the best way to improve the conclusion is to a.) revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic. b.) add details about a future goal to sentence 2. c.) delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive. d.) specify the name of the film in sentence 4.

The best way to improve the  conclusion is to...:

A.) revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic.

Sentences 2, 3 and 4 are linked smoothly and make sense. However, sentence 1 sounds too vague and lacking context. Growth experiences? OK, but how exactly? How did those experiences lead to the improvement of the speaker's math skills? Something is definitely missing.

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