Emily dickinson's 'the bustle in a house' reflects her obsession with death." why is this, a weak thesis statement for an interpretive essay?

Emily Dickinson, poet, demonstrated an acceptance of death throughout several of her poems.  Dickinson writes about the brief, busy, suspended period of time between the death of a loved one and the private grief that follows.

Basically someone who does it to you steady doing someone wrong that’s doing good make them wanna do you bad