Help with L and M please

This goes with my last question just if you can i’d really appreciate it ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Any french speakers? could someone check if my grammar is correct? my text: ma visite au zoo se passe bien. c’est très intéressant. ii y a les ours, les éléphants, les lions, les singes, les tigres, et les canards. les ours dorment. les singes sauter beaucoup. les tigres courent vite. les marchent canards.what i was it to say in english: my visit to the zoo is going good. it is very interesting. there are bears, elephants, lions, monkeys, tigers, and ducks. the bears sleep. the monkeys jump a lot. the tigers run fast. the ducks walk.

Imagine that you and your family are vacationing in guadeloupe or martinique. write an e-mail to your french pen pal telling him or her three things that you just did, three more things you are going to do, and end by asking him or her at least two questions.